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Every
year, the NYSCA Decentralization Program
attracts between 1200 and 1400 requests for
support of community-based art activities and
programs. The DEC process is administered by DEC
Coordinators at 46 sites around the state.
Your
job is much more than just accepting the grant
applications and sending them to the panel. You
are the front line person who is expected to
know everything, make on-the-spot decisions, and
perform some serious hand holding.
"Grant
Writing Basics" -
is designed to help
you help your DEC applicants write better
proposals. There are at least two reasons for
wanting better proposals from your
applicants.
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First,
the process of writing an effective proposal
is an educational one. It encourages
the applicant to "take stock" and
look at what they do with a critical eye,
and helps them to describe their programs
clearly to you and to other potential
funders. By passing this information along
to your applicants, you are providing them
with a valuable developmental service.
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Second,
well-written proposals make your job much
easier! When information is presented
clearly and accurately - in other words,
when the applicant truly does the work of
presenting the information - it can save you
hours of phoning and meeting and mailing.
And panel meetings will go much smoother
when proposals are clearly written and
budgets actually make sense!
I
have organized the basic grant writing skills
into three lessons and an exercise.:
Controlling
the panel discussion - Lesson 1
Paying
attention to the first sentence - Lesson 2
Writing
the narrative and budget at the same time -
Lesson 3
Improve
this proposal - an exercise
I
have focused on two primary goals in better
grant writing practice:
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to
write less, but better.
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to
avoid stylistic and factual errors that
distract the panel's focus on the merits of
the proposed project.
We
will only be able to skim the surface of
effective grant writing in this tutorial, but I
hope you will print the materials from this web
site and share them with your DEC applicants in
workshops of your own or direct applicants to
this tutorial on this web site.
So
lets go and start the tutorial!
Lesson
1: Control the Panel Discussion
Each
proposal that comes before a panel begins a new
discussion. You, the proposal writer, want the
discussion to be short and favorable to your
project. You accomplish that goal with a
good narrative and budget.
You
don't want the discussion to get off on the
wrong track, or on some minor point that doesn't
support your argument for funding. Your job
is to control the panel discussion, and make
sure that nothing in your narrative and budget
distracts them from your project.
The
best way to accomplish a brief and focused panel
discussion is by presenting them with a brief
and focused proposal! Here are some tips:
1.
Try not to project an attitude. Panels
don't want to hear how "important"
or inspiring" your program is. You invite
a panelist to disagree with your assessment,
and dangerously side-track the discussion. On
the other side of this coin, avoid flip or
sarcastic remarks; that works against your
interests every time.
2.
Keep historical and background information
very brief. The proposal is requesting
support for future activities, not past ones.
3.
Don 't write about activities that are not
part of the proposed program.
Inexperienced proposal writers seem to think
that quantity makes a good impression on
panelists. In fact, too much information tends
to confuse panelists and to cause exactly the
kind of questions you are trying to avoid.
("Is this what they want support
for?" "When did they do that?")
Lesson
2: The first sentence is the most important
sentence
Compare
these two sample opening sentences
and see which one tells the fundraising story
better:
1)The
Atlas Dance Company began in 1956 when my
father, Harold Atlas, determined that the state
of modern dance in the Central New York Region
needed serious improvement.
or
this:
2)The
Atlas Dance Company requests a grant of $2,000
in support of artist fees, musicians and
costumes for its 1997-1998 season.
Only
one sentence can be the first sentence, and it
is important to use it wisely. The first
sentence of the request must clearly state how
much money is requested, and what that money
will be used for.
This
principle is simple: the most important and
relevant information appears first! The next
most important and relevant information appears
next, and so on. This is how people read - they
start at the beginning and work their way down
to the end.
A
proposal is not a history lesson!
Or a music
lesson, or an art history course, or a personal
statement. It is usually a simple request for
support of a project.
CONTEXT
Often there is a reason to place the current
project in some kind of context. Perhaps it is
the fifteenth year of a successful concert
series; perhaps a current program is going to be
expanded. This kind of context can help make a
strong argument for support. However, it should
appear later in the narrative, as briefly as
possible, and not distract from the main point.
Lesson
3: Create the narrative and budget at the same
time
Your
proposal narrative and budget provide the same
information in two different forms. You should
write them together, so that they support each
other and strengthen your case.
There
are two fundamental mistakes made in
project budgets (and many less fundamental
mistakes!):
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Including
a budget item not mentioned in the
narrative.
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Excluding
a budget item that IS mentioned in the
narrative.
If
you have been paying attention to lessons 1 and
2, you know what the result is in the panel
discussion when they find either of these basic
mistakes.
They
DISCUSS those mistakes! And that's just what you
want to avoid.
The
solution is to write the narrative and the
budget at the same time, side by side.
Here are some examples:
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NARRATIVE
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BUDGET
ITEM
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The
concert will include three musicians ...
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Musicians
(3 @ $250)
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$750
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We
plan to record the concert for future
distribution and possible sales ...
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Recording
Service (include, engineer and
equipment)
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350
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Recording
tape
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75
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We
will advertise our concerts in several
local newspapers and with a mailing ...
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Advertising
(Print)
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600
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Brochures
(500) production
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25
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Mailing
(500 Brochures @ .32)
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160
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As
you see, every line in the narrative that
describes any kind of cost must be
reflected in the project budget.
INCOME:
Many DEC project budgets project no income
of any kind outside of the DEC award. This
immediately raises two questions in the mind
of panelists (or should raise the
questions):
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If
this project has value to the community, why
is there no community support?
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If
we award less than the request amount, how
can they carry out the project?
The
best way to avoid these questions is to show
other sources of support, earned or contributed,
even in-kind support, that shows someone else
besides the applicant cares about this project.
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An
exercise: Improve this proposal
We
have discussed the three basics of
constructing concise and readable
grant proposals -proposals that work
for your project, not against it!
The
three basics are:
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Control
the panel discussion
with your
narrative.
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Don't
waste the important first
sentence.
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Create
the narrative and the budget at
the same time.
Here
is an example of a proposal that needs
improvement. Read it carefully with the
above points in mind. Write an improved
version of the narrative, then do the
same for the budget.
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NARRATIVE
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BUDGET
ITEM
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Johnstown
is a town that lost its
industrial base twenty years
ago, and suffered serious
economic decline from which it
never fully recovered. Not only
has the town seen a loss of
shops and municipal services, it
has also lost population. In the
1970 census, Johnstown was
listed as having over 30,000
people living within the town
limits. Today, we have fewer
than 22, 000 people.
We
have been presenting an
important chamber music series
in Johnstown since 1991, and
regularly receive very positive
press reviews for our efforts.
Our exciting concerts are
presented in the town's high
school auditorium, and are
sometimes attended by over 50
people. Our ten musicians are
drawn from the faculty of the
local junior college, which was
founded in 1982 and has several
professional and technical
degree programs. We perform a
variety of music, from the
classics to the moderns, and
vary the ensemble to include
trios, quartets, and the full
chamber group.
We
are proud of our ability to
publicize our concerts widely,
including newspaper ads, local
radio spots,
and a mailer to our membership.
We hope the panel recognizes our
significant accomplishments in
this relatively poor community,
and fully supports our
request this year.
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Income
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Ticket
Sales
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350
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Contributions
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Business
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250
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Individuals
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250
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In
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TOTAL
INCOME
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500
$1,450
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Expenses
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Musicans
(5 X 3 X$100)
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$1,500
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Rehearsal
space
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500
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Rental
scores
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300
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Travel
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75
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Recording
service
TOTAL
EXPENSES
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250
$2,625
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GRANT
REQUEST
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$1,225
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