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Community Arts Grant Programs in Wyoming County are funded by the  Decentralization Program (DEC) of the New York State Council on the Arts. Created in 1977 by the New York State Legislature, the Decentralization Re-grant Program encourages participation in the arts in communities throughout New York State, by providing resources for individual community members and groups to create a wide variety of stimulating arts and  cultural programs and activities .  DEC helps rising artists and organizations to grow professionally and to strengthens the community. 

Applications must be legible. (Forms are available in Acrobat PDF, MS-Word & ASCII formats on our website or via email.)     

 

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March 7, 2008  7pm

 

Community Arts Grants Help

 

 


Grant Writing Basics

by Gerald Lindah, NYSCA/SLP Program


 

TUTORIAL OVERVIEW
Control the Panel Discussion -
Lesson 1

The Important First Sentence -
Lesson 2

Create the Narrative & Budget
at the Same Time -
Lesson3

 

Improve this proposal -
an exercise

Every year, the NYSCA Decentralization Program attracts between 1200 and 1400 requests for support of community-based art activities and programs. The DEC process is administered by DEC Coordinators at 46 sites around the state.

Your job is much more than just accepting the grant applications and sending them to the panel. You are the front line person who is expected to know everything, make on-the-spot decisions, and perform some serious hand holding.

"Grant Writing Basics" - is designed to help you help your DEC applicants write better proposals. There are at least two reasons for wanting better proposals from your applicants.

  • First, the process of writing an effective proposal is an educational one. It encourages the applicant to "take stock" and look at what they do with a critical eye, and helps them to describe their programs clearly to you and to other potential funders. By passing this information along to your applicants, you are providing them with a valuable developmental service.

  • Second, well-written proposals make your job much easier! When information is presented clearly and accurately - in other words, when the applicant truly does the work of presenting the information - it can save you hours of phoning and meeting and mailing. And panel meetings will go much smoother when proposals are clearly written and budgets actually make sense!

I have organized the basic grant writing skills into three lessons and an exercise.:

Controlling the panel discussion - Lesson 1

Paying attention to the first sentence - Lesson 2

Writing the narrative and budget at the same time - Lesson 3

Improve this proposal - an exercise

I have focused on two primary goals in better grant writing practice:

  • to write less, but better.

  • to avoid stylistic and factual errors that distract the panel's focus on the merits of the proposed project.

We will only be able to skim the surface of effective grant writing in this tutorial, but I hope you will print the materials from this web site and share them with your DEC applicants in workshops of your own or direct applicants to this tutorial on this web site.

So lets go and start the tutorial!
Lesson 1: Control the Panel Discussion

Each proposal that comes before a panel begins a new discussion. You, the proposal writer, want the discussion to be short and favorable to your project. You accomplish that goal with a good narrative and budget.

You don't want the discussion to get off on the wrong track, or on some minor point that doesn't support your argument for funding. Your job is to control the panel discussion, and make sure that nothing in your narrative and budget distracts them from your project.

The best way to accomplish a brief and focused panel discussion is by presenting them with a brief and focused proposal! Here are some tips:

1. Try not to project an attitude. Panels don't want to hear how "important" or inspiring" your program is. You invite a panelist to disagree with your assessment, and dangerously side-track the discussion. On the other side of this coin, avoid flip or sarcastic remarks; that works against your interests every time.

2. Keep historical and background information very brief. The proposal is requesting support for future activities, not past ones.

3. Don 't write about activities that are not part of the proposed program.
Inexperienced proposal writers seem to think that quantity makes a good impression on panelists. In fact, too much information tends to confuse panelists and to cause exactly the kind of questions you are trying to avoid. ("Is this what they want support for?" "When did they do that?")


Lesson 2: The first sentence is the most important sentence

Compare these two sample opening sentences
and see which one tells the fundraising story better:

1)The Atlas Dance Company began in 1956 when my father, Harold Atlas, determined that the state of modern dance in the Central New York Region needed serious improvement.

or this:

2)The Atlas Dance Company requests a grant of $2,000 in support of artist fees, musicians and costumes for its 1997-1998 season.

Only one sentence can be the first sentence, and it is important to use it wisely. The first sentence of the request must clearly state how much money is requested, and what that money will be used for.

This principle is simple: the most important and relevant information appears first! The next most important and relevant information appears next, and so on. This is how people read - they start at the beginning and work their way down to the end.

A proposal is not a history lesson! Or a music lesson, or an art history course, or a personal statement. It is usually a simple request for support of a project.

CONTEXT
Often there is a reason to place the current project in some kind of context. Perhaps it is the fifteenth year of a successful concert series; perhaps a current program is going to be expanded. This kind of context can help make a strong argument for support. However, it should appear later in the narrative, as briefly as possible, and not distract from the main point.

Lesson 3: Create the narrative and budget at the same time

Your proposal narrative and budget provide the same information in two different forms. You should write them together, so that they support each other and strengthen your case.

There are two fundamental mistakes made in project budgets (and many less fundamental mistakes!):

  1. Including a budget item not mentioned in the narrative.

  2. Excluding a budget item that IS mentioned in the narrative.

If you have been paying attention to lessons 1 and 2, you know what the result is in the panel discussion when they find either of these basic mistakes.

They DISCUSS those mistakes! And that's just what you want to avoid.

The solution is to write the narrative and the budget at the same time, side by side.
Here are some examples:

NARRATIVE

BUDGET ITEM

The concert will include three musicians ...

Musicians (3 @ $250)

$750

We plan to record the concert for future distribution and possible sales ...

Recording Service (include, engineer and equipment)

350

 

Recording tape

75

We will advertise our concerts in several
local newspapers and with a mailing ...

Advertising (Print)

600

Brochures (500) production

25

 

Mailing (500 Brochures @ .32)

160

As you see, every line in the narrative that describes any kind of cost must be
reflected in the project budget.

INCOME:
Many DEC project budgets project no income of any kind outside of the DEC award. This immediately raises two questions in the mind of panelists (or should raise the questions):

  1. If this project has value to the community, why is there no community support?

  2. If we award less than the request amount, how can they carry out the project?

The best way to avoid these questions is to show other sources of support, earned or contributed, even in-kind support, that shows someone else besides the applicant cares about this project.


An exercise: Improve this proposal

We have discussed the three basics of constructing concise and readable grant proposals -proposals that work for your project, not against it!

The three basics are:

  1. Control the panel discussion with your narrative.

  2. Don't waste the important first sentence.

  3. Create the narrative and the budget at the same time.

Here is an example of a proposal that needs improvement. Read it carefully with the above points in mind. Write an improved version of the narrative, then do the same for the budget.

NARRATIVE

 

BUDGET ITEM

Johnstown is a town that lost its industrial base twenty years ago, and suffered serious economic decline from which it never fully recovered. Not only has the town seen a loss of shops and municipal services, it has also lost population. In the 1970 census, Johnstown was listed as having over 30,000 people living within the town limits. Today, we have fewer than 22, 000 people.

We have been presenting an important chamber music series in Johnstown since 1991, and regularly receive very positive press reviews for our efforts. Our exciting concerts are presented in the town's high school auditorium, and are sometimes attended by over 50 people. Our ten musicians are drawn from the faculty of the local junior college, which was founded in 1982 and has several professional and technical degree programs. We perform a variety of music, from the classics to the moderns, and vary the ensemble to include trios, quartets, and the full chamber group.

We are proud of our ability to publicize our concerts widely, including newspaper ads, local radio spots,
and a mailer to our membership. We hope the panel recognizes our significant accomplishments in this relatively poor community, and fully supports our
request this year.

 

Income

 

Ticket Sales

350

 

Contributions

 

Business

250

 

Individuals

250

 

In - kind

TOTAL INCOME

500

$1,450

 

Expenses

 

Musicans
(5 X 3 X$100)

$1,500

 

Rehearsal space

500

 

Rental scores

300

 

Travel

75

 

Recording service

TOTAL EXPENSES

250

$2,625

GRANT REQUEST

$1,225

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Panel Comments

Below are some examples of comments panel members have made when reviewing applications for Community Arts Grants.  These should be considered when completing your application.

  In favor of project:

High In-Kind Donations;
Serves many people in the community;
A very intensive arts experience;
Accessible to families and those with little money;
Very thorough budget;
Unique project;
Very reasonable artist fees;
Solid advertising budget;
Unusual opportunity for ____ (specific group);
Very clear project with contingency plan if funding is lower than requested;
Good growth in project from one year to the next.

  Questioning whether to fund or fund as requested (things you want to avoid having the panel wonder about):

Unclear on how professional services will be procured;
Low community involvement / support;
There should be some organizational financial support.
Unclear how many artists are participating;
Will the space hold the projected audience?
Cost of facility use is high;
Doesn’t use local talent; wish it did.
Fundraising group.  Shouldn’t they be contributing some money?
Couldn’t it (shouldn’t it) be funded by ____ (another program)?
Is ____ (budget item such as special equipment) necessary for the project?
Are equipment rental / supply estimates reasonable and realistic?
Are the abilities of those involved with the project equal to the task at hand?
(Resumes unclear or unreadable.)
In-Kind contributions appear in narrative but are not estimated on budget sheet;
Incomplete application;
Budget does not balance;
Why isn’t there other community support?
Pay professional artists!
Admissions seem low;
Expected audience seems low;
Appears that participation would be limited to membership;
Advertising in narrative but not in budget;
Is facility accessible?
Participation is low compared with what is possible;
Looks like a fundraiser;
Budget lists many vague and expensive items.

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